Sunday, March 15, 2009
esse. If i were a teacher
I think teacher is very nice proffession.i were 9 years old,i was dream be a teacher.Because teacher teach own all of knowledge for other people.So all of people respect to teacher.If students get good markets,teacher will happy.But if students get bad markets teacher will worried.All people have a teacher.Best doctor,scientist,singer and actor,president are student of teacher.So best teacher is very great. But disadvantages of be teacher very tired and stressfull
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2. When I was 9 years old, my dream was to become a teacher.
3. Because teacher teaches all his/her knowledge to other people.
4. So all people respect teacher.
5. If students get good marks, teacher will be happy.
6. But if students get bad marks, teacher will be worried.
7. All people have teacher.
8. Best doctor,scientist,singer and actor,president are student of a/their/ teacher.
9. So, the best teacher is very great.
10. But disadvantage of teacher is being very tired and stressfull